On God’s Front Lawn – 1st review on YW,com

I had eagerly awaited my 1st review on youwrite.com and when it arrived yesterday, I soaked up every word of advise.

The first 3 chapters was given 3 stars out of 5, which thrilled me – phew.

However, the reader had gone to great lengths to point out parts that didn’t work so well, so last night and this morning, I have been changing the parts suggested. Too fast, I hear you cry, why not wait to hear what others have to say.

Yes, I hear what you’re saying, however the reader had literally written thousands of reviews and she clearly understood the craft of writing.

I somehow wish it hadn’t taken me so long to join the site, but as the old adage goes, better late than never.

Anyway, the sun is shining and it’s Mother’s Day so I will bid you all farewell.

Happy Word Flow One & All