Perfect characters

A couple of times, readers reviewing Almost an Affair said that they were unsure whether they liked the main protagonist, Celia. To be fair, I find it hard to really get to know a character before the end of the first chapter, and sometimes the protagonist is unlikeable at first and then the reader warms to them.

Let’s face it, sometimes the ‘good’ characters in a book are forgotten about or over-shadowed by the more intriguing ‘bad’ characters. I tend to like characters with dark edges, they seem to be more alive and energetic than the bland and insipid ones.

One could say that as I have my own dark edges, I relate better to the characters with the same flaw. Perhaps that is why my characters are written that way, and yes, some people may find them unlikeable.

One reviewer called Celia an enigma – which is a step in the preferable direction.

I like to think that my novels like to explore life in all its glory, which includes characters who are dull, boring, edgy and so forth; after all, perfection doesn’t exist in my life – I don’t know about yours of course!

I want to celebrate characters who have flaws that won’t necessarily been resolved by the end of the novel. I have a propensity to have a character commit suicide at the end of a novel, but I’m trying to be less radical, perhaps seeking an open ended resolution, where the reader can make up their own mind, or perhaps get them thinking about it for a few hours.

Happy Word Flow One & All

When the confidence goes – what to do?

I have sadly been struck by the ‘I am a pants writer’ disease. It has nibbled away at me for a few days before erupting into the full blown disease.

I have hidden away from this blog, I have hardly tweeted and i have only had short bursts of writing interjected with taking one daughter or the other to the GP, parents evenings and general household necessities.

Why is it that some days I feel I have a story to tell, emotions to explore and characters to create, and other days, I feel an empty darkness pervading my soul that prevents me from putting pen to paper or fingers to keyboard.

It’s not writers block – the characters live and play in my head most days – and I’m not clinically depressed, I just find waiting for agents to say yes or no hard at times. The longer the time goes on the easier it gets I suppose, but even ease can fluctuate.

The odd tweet about this has seen me receive sweet words from people on Twitter so I know I’m not alone in suffering from this malicious syndrome – but malady in numbers doesn’t feel less painful.

I went to a comedy club last weekend and Arthur Smith said that I was too kind, hence I’ll not always get what I want – does he know something I don’t?

I have a couple of competition pieces in the pipeline if I can put words to quill.

Fellow writers and bloggers – what do you do in times like these? I had a hot cross bun with jam and clotted cream which I suppose helped as I’ve written this!

Happy Word Flow One & All

Almost an Affair – start of chapter one

I want to copy & paste, but it wouldn’t work, not even my teenage daughter could help me, so I am typing the first part to wet your appetite.

Chapter one.

Celia gazed at her alabaster skin that looked even more ethereal than usual in the remorseless light of the stark morning sun. Tentacles of sun crept through chinks of stained glass in the bedroom window, casting multi-coloured droplets on the white ceiling and walls.

The black dress she was obliged to wear over her willowy figure, drained her face of any perceptible colour and the only positive aspect she could perceive in the mirror was that her pearl necklace and matching earrings looked picture perfect against the black chiffon dress.

James would have appreciated the serene demeanour of his wife, and the suitable hush that shrouded the house.

Chapter one continues…..

I would have liked to have given you the whole of chapter one, but it’s rather soul destroying typing it out because it won’t copy and paste.

The first review I got on youwrite.com was excellent – not wishing to sound pompous – it was truly a lovely review and the second one is in the pipeline – may not be as complimentary of course – it’s all personal taste after all.

I wanted to use this blog as a platform to promote myself – but not if I have to type out chapters each time – life’s too short!

I haven’t been on twitter for a few days – been writing and writing reviews on youwrite – there are some amazing authors out there.

Happy Word Flow One & All

Almost an Affair – WIP – taster

Call me impetuous, but I’ve uploaded my current WIP – Almost an Affair – onto youwritecom

Why another novel on the site I hear you cry – well, I thought it might be useful to start ‘working’ with the site whilst I have only written 17, 500. I like to keep a check on my writing this way, so it made sense to me.

Almost an Affair

Her husband James has just died, but his past is resurrected through his mistress, another woman and her son. Celia tries to cope with these revelations whilst she tries to please everyone around her, especially her daughter, Jennifer.
She sometimes forget her own needs.

I’m sorry this is short, not that well today and I have one of the guineapigs on my lap with my laptop – nightmare city!

This is a little taster, but I’ve a long way to go as there are quite a few characters and their paths are winding.

Happy Word Flow One & All

On God’s Front Lawn – 1st review on YW,com

I had eagerly awaited my 1st review on youwrite.com and when it arrived yesterday, I soaked up every word of advise.

The first 3 chapters was given 3 stars out of 5, which thrilled me – phew.

However, the reader had gone to great lengths to point out parts that didn’t work so well, so last night and this morning, I have been changing the parts suggested. Too fast, I hear you cry, why not wait to hear what others have to say.

Yes, I hear what you’re saying, however the reader had literally written thousands of reviews and she clearly understood the craft of writing.

I somehow wish it hadn’t taken me so long to join the site, but as the old adage goes, better late than never.

Anyway, the sun is shining and it’s Mother’s Day so I will bid you all farewell.

Happy Word Flow One & All

Thoughts of the day

I’m enjoying youwrite.com as I’ve reviewed 2 pieces of work, so 2 more to go then I can read what others have said about mine. On reading the works, I realised how well other people write – not that I ever doubted it – and what competition is out there to tempt the agents and publishers.

Does this make me want to turn and run – no – it makes me want to write better and work harder. I think my current WIP is perhaps better written that the previous one – but perhaps all writers feel that way about their work?

I have entered 2 competitions recently but i expect to come nowhere as i made some rudimentary mistakes that I only spotted afterwards – less haste blah blah.

I have finished another comp piece that I need to send off but I must check it before – it’s so annoying that spellcheck doesn’t pick up single letter mistakes ie. p- u -o

I’m finding that my current characters are buzzing around my head during the day even when I’m doing something else – they feel so real – I just hope they feel as real to the readers that will one day fall upon my work in a library or WHSmith or Amazon – it’s good to dream.

Dreaming isn’t enough – I must work, work , work at this dream to make it come true.
Only I have the power and control over my dreams – I need others’ expertise so help the dream become a reality.

Happy Word Flow One & All